Feed back appreciated, note that it doesnt look like it should. please bear with it.
(verse for In the End)
You take the,
One thing, that makes you proud,
And use it to get out of the crowd,
Now, you hear the sound of your name called out loud,
Voices contsantly saying your to blame,
So, you, close your eyes and try to defy,
The truth in the lie, break down and start to cry,
As moral obligations come in thunderous reveal,
You start to realize what you really meant to feel,
(Verse for Hands Held High)
tired of sitting here feeling the blues,
Seeing every dead soldiers name up in the news,
Its gotten to othe point where its just giving us cues,
To tell us when the support for the troops ensues,
Nows the time to show that we care,
instead of stopping and giving sorrowful stares,
sometimes we need to think another way of what to say,
realizing that another letter came home today...
Please note that I am looking for minor critique on how I captured the song, or just how good my verse was. Im not planning on re writing their songs, but just wrote to their beat pretty much. hope you enjoy ^_^
Rayzer
